Had to do a free verse poem for Creative Writing, and thought I'd do a B/A one. It doesn't come out and say it's Buffy and Angel, but you'll see that it is by reading it. I'm not really good at writing any types of poems, and this is my first. In Angel's POV. It's kind of short, but any feedback would be nice. Thanks!

She's so beautiful
Blonde hair blowing infront of her face,
always calm and caring.
Those big green eyes looking at me
longingly
Her vanilla scent floats through the air
clinging to my body. it helps me remember.
her soft touch, warm and gentle
caressing my skin. if only she could remember...
She's so powerful, yet so delicate.
I wonder how this anomaly came to be.
How long have I waited for her?
Years
Decades
Longer than this old mind can remember
She's so sleek
So stealthy at night. As beautiful as night.
like the moon smiling down on
me
Only me
Do I deserve her?
this thing I worship
Is this meant to be?
or maybe it's just
True

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